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at the ball pt 4

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Dead_in_the_Wall
5th Jun 2010, 12:07 PM

Apologies for the late upload, Amoeba was having internet troubles.

Nearly all the guests have arrived, and the party is definately getting started!

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GrifterWolf
6th Jun 2010, 12:21 AM

He seems to have a heart of gold but his stomach is a black hole, oh wait... duh Draenei. *runs and crashes the party*

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Ahhh!

Kristen
6th Jun 2010, 7:46 AM

I love your art. I love this paladin!

It's Shattrath. :x

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Eychrus
6th Jun 2010, 9:15 AM

I have to agree there too he's awesome.

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Axolotl
6th Jun 2010, 9:30 AM

Errors been fixed, thanks everyone. :)

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Falconfury
6th Jun 2010, 3:15 PM

That female draenei is giving me baaaad thoughts...

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Nice

Nielsdejong
6th Jun 2010, 3:58 PM

I love how the Draenei looks :) A potential mate for the lovable Draenei paly? :D

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Sarrior
7th Jun 2010, 4:15 AM

hawt draenei <3

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Sukugaru
7th Jun 2010, 6:36 AM

I've just recently gone through (and through, and through) all of Out of World, and I love the comicking and storytelling. The first three panels of At the Ball 4, for example. Almost no dialog, but you don't need it, because Zohaar is just so expressive (and enthusiastic about his food!)

Another great example is the comic where the orc, tauren, and dwarf get utterly smashed together - there was no dialog in that, but again, it was so expressive (and all three so enthusiastic about their drink) it didn't need dialog.

Keep it up!

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Taiine
13th Jun 2010, 7:04 PM

*pssst*
2nd panel, right tendril (by the fork) missing the gold band.
Fork is VERY hard to take notice of, I didn't see it (or the missing band) at all this whole time the page has been up until JUST now.

Also the baloon with 'eat' is rather easy tom miss. I would recommend moving it to the top panel with the gnomes close up and adding something like 'excuse me?" to the one of him looking over his shoulder to tie into the other deaenei speaking to him.

Make it flow a little better.

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Gabriel
3rd Oct 2010, 2:48 PM

Did u make the draenei look like Angelina Jolie, or is it just a coincidence?

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